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Review:Jchrissy says:
Okay, I have never been a Lavender fan, so I was excited to read this and see what you did with her. I have to say, that for such a short introduction, this was so very strong and captivating. I couldn't get over the line about him tearing into her... it gave me those horrible chilly mental images.

I think that you're doing a great job really putting me inside her mind, the choppy structure completely feels believable in the state she is in and I think it really strengthens this start.

It's weird, because I most often read about the excitement with the war ending, not about all the negative that was still left over. But there was so much hurt virtually everywhere, how could it not have shadowed everything?

The description of the scars is also amazing, traumatizing, but amazing. To mix something as innocent as a child's puzzle with it was perfect.

You really sucked me in with this, please feel free to let me know when chapter 2 is out, or post it in my review thread, because I would love to continue!

Thanks for the swap!

Jami

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