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Review:AC_rules says:
Hullo there! There's something really compelling about this pairing that I find a tad irresistible - I guess it's because they're both mentioned so little that, now I've thought about it, I find it really difficult to imagine either of them ending up with anyone but each other. So, thank you for introducing me to shipping these lovely two together... I like it.

There's this one paragraph starting with Finally, alone in my office again my thoughts returned to Tracey and Audrey. where your tenses suddenly go a bit off. It doesn't happen much during the rest of the story so I thought I'd just point it off - you have him wondering something in present tense, which is fine (although might be a little clearer if it was in italics or ' marks) but then you have 'it's' instead of 'it was'. Just an itsy bitsy mistake :)

But, I like the way this whole relationship is moving - in early stages, but he has a definite intention for them to be together together which is realistic and nice to read about. Basically, another lovely instalment and thanks for writing! I'm glad I got a chance to stop by this one :)

-AC

Author's Response: YAY! A new Tracey/Theo shipper! I'm so glad that you are able to see them being together now that you have read my story! Yeah I have a bit of a problem with switching tenses and need a beta to help fix all those small errors but as I've lost my outline for the story, I want to wait and get one until after I've found it so I can continue on with the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I love getting your reviews they always make me feel warm and fuzzy!

~Slytherinchica08~

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