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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I told you I would be back and thanks again for reviewing my story as well, I always appreciate talking to you all, it makes me very happy! :D
Anyway, there are so many differences with your story versus mine that I couldn't help talking about them! Firstly, your Scorpy is so mean and nasty,which I adore and I'm curious to see what you do with he and Albus and if things develop into pure hatred. Hahaha. They might already be there, hahaha.
Anyway, I liked this chapter but you should probably go back and edit a bit on your spelling and grammar in the first half. Aside from that it was an enjoyable read and I liked your mix of kids that Albus and Rose befriend and their backstories. Will you be going into more detail with them? I hope so! :D Anyway, I'll be back for the third chapter when I have more time so don't worry about me not reviewing again! I shall be your personal HPFF stalker. :D
Keep going please!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: hi!
Yes, I always thought scorpy should be mean and nasty like his father, and the only thing between him and albus is PURE HATRED, oh, and the jinxes they cast at each other in the hall ways. Mwahahaha...
Anyways, I will go into more detail about Luke and Mike as the story goes on. And you will find Luke's backstory and life is A LOT more complicated then usual. (oops, said too much, don't want to spoil it do we?)
I am really happy to have a great reviewer like you!
Keep Reading!


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