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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Oh no! That ending makes things a little more complicated! Well at least she is finally getting the guy she wants but too bad its while he is in a relationship with someone else. I must say though that I was really hoping for some romance between Fred and Hannah during this chapter! But I guess only reading and will tell me if that ever happens. I'm sorry that it took so long for me to get here from the review tag but alas I am here with your review!

I really enjoyed the second chapter and thought you did a great job with description. I loved the funny parts that you had throughout the chapter such as the eating contest, her sitting on Al's lap and moving around, throwing the silverware at all. Really I thought this was great! Great Job!


Author's Response: Hi!

haha.. it does! Unfortunately, you are correct, he really had some terrible timing with outing his feelings. Aw, I wish I could have thrown in some Fred and Hannah here too... that needs a little bit more time to come out in the open if that will happen ;D

Oh, thank you! I did a big (well, big to me) revision on some of the humor and a tad on the descriptions so I am actually really happy that those stood out to you! Actually, I toned it down from what I think was too... much trying to be funny, to more actual entertaining humor, so I'm rambling but I'm glad you liked it :)

Thank you so much for the review!

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