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Review:MagicalInk says:
I'm really intrigued by this story and thankful I came across it! The fact that you're exploring Ignotus' younger years in a novel (I've seen many one-shots on this) and actually driving more attention to Anastasia is really great!

I'm not sure if it's canon, Hogwarts being there by tehe Peverel's time but I often get lost in timelines so please correct me if I'm wrong :)

I really like your characterizations, that talkative little girl and the Peverel brothers seem really realistic to me. Though maybe, just maybe, a tad older thanthey actually are. They seem very smart, and I'm not only talking about Ignotus, but his brother using 'arrogant' was quite a surprise. And Ignotus being that serious... Though it could just be because of the social level they live in and all that, just be careful not to make them overly smart.

I loved your descriptions. You payed attention to the smallest of details yet kept me wanting fo more with each word. Everything felt very formal, but I think it really fits the era and makes it all more endearing.

So overall, great introductory first chapter and keep your descriptions so beautiful like this!
Very curious of the next chapter :)
-Val

Author's Response: Hello there! I think that my huge interest in the story of the Three Brothers is what initially encouraged me to write this story. I absolutely love all three of them and I'm glad to see that there are others who find them interesting as well.

I've also researched this before starting my story and Hogwarts is said to have been founded around the late 9th/early 10th century. And this story takes place after that as will be shown further on in the story. :)

I'm glad you like the characters that have been introduced so far; that's always great to hear! And I promise I'll try to be cautious with Ignotus.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving this lovely review! :D

-Manno



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