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Review:ScorpiusRose17 says:
Hi there!

Sorry it has taken me so long to get to this. Life has been busy.

It has been forever since I have reviewed this story, but this chapter was done so nicely, it was very easy to pick up and remember where I left off. I really like all the description in the transfiguration demonstration. I thought it was a clever way to really bring out what the subject is about and a really great way to get their attention. I loved PIES. Poor Sammy shaking his head at the silliness of the theory. I am glad that they didn't go with the other word...could you imagine how many owls Professor Bennett would get or howlers? =)

This chapter was quite intense. Relationship wise between Rose/Louis/Albus. Rose was a little stuck up, prissy, know it all. It really got on my nerves, but I am glad too because I want to see her in a different light than I am use to. She just cannot except anyone else being better at something than her. I really don't understand her huge blow up at Albus and Louis. Screaming at them because they had changed...well it looks like it's the one who expresses their feelings first is really the one who's afraid of their own truths. I hope that makes sense.

I was happy when Albus and Louis stuck up for themselves. So what if they were put in Slytherin. It just goes to show how the times don't always change everything. She took some mean swipes at Albus about his Dad.

Overall, I really loved this chapter even though Rose was annoyingly rude and down right unpleasant. Keep up the awesome writing and I cannot wait to read more!! =)

-SR17

Author's Response: I have the feeling that the first-years might find out the "other" acronym before the year's out...

For some reason my writing always seems to descend into arguments and slanging matches one way or another - and we've not seen the last of it here. Not by a long chalk.

Thanks again

Sheriff


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