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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Wow. This piece is short and sweet, but VERY emotionally complex. I've read TONS of stories where Sirius runs around chasing after a different girl every day, but you never really see a story from the girl's point of view! So this was a real treat; kudos to you for originality! :)

I loved how you showed the complexity of Marian's feelings. I think we can all go through that sometimes; she hates Sirius, but she loves him at the same time... it's very realistic. You made it very easy to sympathize with Marian, as well; after all this time and how she was ignored, she still just wants to thank Sirius for allowing her to love him... it's so sad!

All in all, this was a great piece! The flow was perfect, and it was just the right length, not too long and not too short. Didn't see any spelling or grammar issues either; great job! 10/10!

Author's Response: Jayde! Ah, I'm so late to respond to this incredible review! Endless buckets of apologies unto you, my dear! Eep! ^.^

You are far too kind. haha I'm so, so happy to hear that the story, while very simple, was still able to evoke emotion! And it's also great that you enjoyed hearing this sort of story from the opposite POV than it's usually told in! I really wanted it to be unique in that way, so I'm releived that it paid off and wasn't just a silly idea! Thank you!

Mhmm, I am so right there with you. I've definitely experienced the roller-coaster ride that is boys. haha It's great to hear that Marian was so easy to relate to. There are so many stories out there in which the guy gets the girl and vice-versa, but in life that's, more often than not, not the case. I understand that stories are sometimes a place we go to escape real life, to find happiness and hope, but I just wanted to be realistic here, and I'm really glad it was worth the risk!

All in all, you're the best, this review is wonderful, and I am endlessly grateful that you took the time to leave it! Thank you, Jayde! *hugs*


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