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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
Tanya!! I've been meaning to get around to reading everyone's Task One entries, and I am SO glad I read this one! This truly is brilliant, dear; it's really perfect!

A lot of people (myself included) use the whole 'Susan as a Dragon Keeper' idea, but you went with something TOTALLY different here. It was very original and refreshing and I LOVED it! And not only did you find original ways to incorporate the themes, you also totally made this a 'Hufflepuff Pride' piece as well... reading this made me SO proud to be a 'Puff!!

I absolutely LOVED the rhyming as well; it was just so perfect! And I liked how Susan was compared to a mouse, especially with the 'Even an elephant is scared of a mouse' line! I didn't see any spelling or grammar errors either, everything flowed beautifully, and I really liked how Klyde learned not to judge people just because they're Hufflepuffs!

Amazing piece and definitely one of my favorites! 10/10!

Author's Response: Ah, Jayde! My love! Thank you so much for this incredible review! You, my friend, are far too kind.

Oh 2012 first task, how well I do remember you! I'm so glad you found my dragon idea to be original! It was definitely tempting to use the dragon keeper idea for mine as well, but I was lucky to be struck with this alternative plot! I chalk it up completely to my subconscious and not my own clever originality! haha Seriously, though, the idea just sort of waved at me from the depths of my insanity and also insisted that I rhyme! I am truly ridiculous.

Speaking of rhyming... YAY! Gah, it was so stressful getting this story written in the time limit, having it rhyme, and getting it make sense! I am honestly beyond relieved to hear that I somehow managed to pull it off! Phew! I remember submitting this literally in the final minute before the time limit was up!

What's really great for me is that people found meaning beneath the silly rhyme-scheme, which was something that concerned me greatly the entire time I tried writing it, so thank you so much for what you've said. I love that the Mouse/Elephant bit stood out to you, seeing as it really was a big part of what drove the story for me (one of my first lines when I wrote this fic, actually! Everything was based around it)! And Klyde. Yeah, he needed to learn his lesson, and who better than a Puff to teach it to him? ^.^

You're so wonderful. This review is simply amazing and I can't stop grinning! Endless thank you's sent your way!

Oh, and P.S. I am SO sorry for how long it's taken me to respond to this! I sort of disappeared for a while there, but I am back now and am no less grateful for your kind comments! *hugs*

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