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Review:daretodream says:
I LOVE your Mary McDonald. She is unbelievably awesome and I wish she was my friend. Seriously. We need more people who just tell it like it is in the world.

And Remus! I'm pretty sure if I absolutely had to pick a favorite Marauder, nine times out of ten it would be Remus. And I also think that you did a really good job writing him. He is sweet and in character, and I loved it.

I'm beginning to really not like Stephen. There's just something about him, maybe it is the fact that he is boring. Or maybe it's that he just makes plans for other people without consulting them first. Or that they always hand out with his friend's but never with Andy's.

But SERIOUSLY, Mary was my favorite part of this entire chapter. I think that she should make cameo appearances much more frequently. And thanks to her Andy is going to break up with Stephen! Which will set up the relationships that need to happen!

Great chapter!!

~Cassie

Author's Response: Yay I like Mary too! (That's probably more obvious in later chapters when she starts popping up every ten minutes just for fun) ♥

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