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Review:daretodream says:
Hello!

Maybe it's because I write the same way, but I didn't find the scene jumps distracting. It always seemed pretty obvious where each scene ended, and you blended them well.

Again, I thought this chapter was hilarious. I love all the inner dialogue, I do find it to be rather funny.

My favorite comments were easily all about Stephen. I have a friend who we do something similar to, and so it was hilarious to me, though by the end of the scene where they really made fun of him I did feel bad for Andy. Still, usually when all of one's friends adamantly dislike a significant other, it's not a good sign, no?

Andy had a crush on Sirius in third year? That's so cute! But she's grown out of it now. I LOVED you comment about her secretly finding some of the things he says amusing, but not wanting to show it. I do that quite often.

All in all I think this was a really good chapter! Good work!

~Cassie

Author's Response: I'm actually really pleased to hear that about the scene jumps - I'd been worried about it - and to hear that you find it realistic! I read a lot of fics where the dialogue isn't really believable for sixteen year olds. Thank you again ♥

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