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Review:daretodream says:
Hello! I'm so sorry it took me so long to get over here; usually I'm much more prompt, but my life has been a little busy the past few days.

Marauders stories will always hold a special place in my heart :) I haven't read one in a little while, so I'm glad you requested a review! It was time to get back to my roots!

I really really liked this first chapter. It was humorous, plus a really good start to get the reader interested. I think you introduced just the right amount of characters so that the reader didn't get confused.

Your main character seems sassy and smart and I like it. I was so happy she wasn't afraid to stand up to the Marauders and remind them of who she is. One of my biggest pet peeves are weak OC main characters.

I'd also like to give you a pat on the back for writing in the present tense. I always have the hardest time with it, so to me it always seems like that is worth some extra recognition.

Oh, and before I forget, I'd like to comment on how much I love your story summary. It's adorable.

Great first chapter!


Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for the offer and for popping by - don't worry about the delay at all.

I'm glad that you noticed and appreciated Andy's sassiness (I think that's the only word for it)! I don't want to give anything away, but initially she was very timid - until I realised that wouldn't fit with the plot at all. Thanks so much for your comments! Really nice to hear that you enjoyed it ♥

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