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Review:VampireMaidenPhoenix says:
Oooh, that was so cute! Like she was blushing or something, only the potion did it for her, clever.

I think it would be kind of awesome if this all became one large love triangle, like Scarlet likes both Jeremy and Sirius. Only Jeremy is her bff so that would be weird, and Scarlet/Sirius get a lot of grief for being friendly dispite their houses. Because really, Ravenclaw/Slytherin is fine, but Slytherin/anyone else is terrible. Oh, and if Snape gets involved...

The beginning was slightly confusing at first. I didn't understand certain phrases you'd used like "agony aunt." As well, you might want to add a little less brazen Scarlet and a little more shy Jeremy to Jeremy's perspective? It was interesting to see Jeremy though, like he thinks that all best friend pairs behave as cutesy as they do. That shows just how naive Jeremy really is about things, in spite of being an intelligent Ravenclaw XD

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such an awesome review! I really appreciate it!

Haha that was the idea! I'm glad you liked it:)
Uh-huh.. Nice thinking..I'm not going to reveal anything though ;) Who do you side for though?
Yeah, I guessed it would be a bit too dramatic but then again, its fan fiction xD But yes, I get your idea and I do agree..

Thanks for the review!:)

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