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Review:Mihali1432 says:
Hmmm, I'm not a Malfoy reader but I have to admit, I quiet liked this! Although, I kinda wondered where the war was being held and where Narcissa went (Malfoy Manor? ) I still enjoyed it! I thought when you made her boggart Draco then Lucius and that's how she figured it wasn't real, cause Lucius isn't there! And, just saying, everyone has a patronus except maybe Voldemort. Just not everyone can preform the spell :P

I thought Narcissa's characterization was great! And her small little conceited thoughts were perfectly mixed in with her worrying over Draco. And the emotions that were flying around were well written too!

Although, I just wanna say I think they barriers would've been just a tad stronger than just a reducto on a wall and a blast ended screwt :p Although thinking to add barriers at all was a good choice! :D It made the prompts fit in nicely!

Great job Aditi!!

Mike.

Author's Response: Mike! OMG I can't believe I haven't responded to your review yet!

Thanks a ton for reading and reviewing first off xD

I am glad you liked this little piece of mine. Well I didn't really add those details since I didn't think they were necessary, but I will add them if I do an edit later.
Haha that's a cool thought, thanks!

I am happy you liked my Narcissa and the way her emotions were flying all over the place!

Haha I think so too, but I am not good when it comes to actions and barriers and stuff, you're the expert there, so I just put it in :P

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing Mike :)


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