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Review:VampireMaidenPhoenix says:
I want a Rose Weasley best friend and a Scorpius Malfoy boyfriend. You can make that happen for me yes? You can? YAY. Thank you very much ^_^

I think Campbell's been potioned. That Ambrosia or whatever that love potion's called -- Amortentia, that one. Got confused with Percy Jackson for a moment XD

I just noticed this, but when I write, I tend to forget the legitimate thought process of being in a certain situation, you know? Like when you're reading a mystery, you're presented with all of the clues right then and everything connects much more quickly for you than for the characters. I like that you stay conscious of that concept. It's definitely something that I admire and wish I could remember.

Author's Response: I kind of want a Scorpius too. My husband will just have to do though. I will totally send you a Rose and Scorpius for your birthday or Christmas, whichever comes first ;)

Ah, Andrew can't even claim potion. He's just a huge git, really. He's too calculated to be dosed out on Amortentia, but that's a good idea!

Reading a mystery is much different from being in one. And sometimes Rose is a little slow on the uptake, but she gets there eventually. That seems to be how it goes in these type of stories - the genre kind of doesn't work unless the leads are a bit dense in the right way, you know?

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