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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I'm sorry that its taken me a minute to review this for you, I've been going through some boring real life issues that demanded my reluctant attention. Can you believe that?
Anyway, here I am! I was delighted to see that Pansy had actually landed a job in this chapter and I was really curious about Craddle. He seems like he might be the exact opposite of Pansy and that might actually be a good thing, his presence might bring her out of her shell a bit. :D
I'm looking forward to seeing how her relationships in the work office develop. The fact that she has finally landed a job and is still persistent on restoring her family's reputation is actually pretty admirable. I'm a bit concerned about her mother though and I'm not sure if you're going to put int a subplot with her or not but I'm hoping things turn out. Not sure how that would work when Pansy might be so busy, I have a feeling she would be really embarrassed if her mum found out she was working.
I liked the description of the archives and the fact that Craddle admitted to it not being very popular. It seems like a messy place to be for a minute and its probably not what Pansy was expecting but she can't really complain.
Not sure where you're going to go with this but I'm rooting for Pansy to get some happiness or at least a routine. I'll be going to the next chapter soon, I don't have as much time as I would like and that's depressing as various other stories need me! :(
Anyway, excellent piece of work as usual and I have nothing to complain about. Keep up the amazing job! I am a devoted fan!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello! It's great to see you again and it's no worries about the wait- real life always takes priority, I understand.

Yes, Pansy has finally landed a job, after all of the disappointment, work and troubles of the other chapters. Craddle was a lot of fun to write and you'll see more of him in future chapters, though at the moment I don't think that he will play the most prominant role. He doesn't appear much in the day-to-day aspect of the Archives.

You'll be introduced to her co-workers in the following chapters. I'm interested to see what you think of them. And Pansy will be very determined to work out their relationships in her favour. This first impression of the Archives definitely wasn't what Pansy expected but she will eventually get used to it. It's not so completely different from her expectations and, as you said, she can't really complain.

And yes, something will be happening with her mother... :)

Pansy's life will continue to change and I can promise you that it will settle into some type of a routine... At least for a little while. Thanks once again for taking the time to read and review! I really appreciate your continued reading!

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