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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
Wow, this looks like a really interesting story.

AU can be a little tricky some times, especially when you start mixing things up so much. Its hard to let your reader know what changes exactly you made to your reader. That being said I think you did a wonderful job pulling this off. I wasn't confused about really anything after reading your first chapter.

The actual idea seems extremely interesting. I can see you using a lot of fairy tale motifs with the evil uncle who tries to kill the king and king's son. And I'm extremely interested to see where you're going with this.

Poor Sirius though, you go and give him a better relationship with his father than he had in the books, just to kill the man off in chapter 1!

Any who great first chapter, I hope to see you around the BvB battle some time soon :)


Author's Response: This SHOULD be an interesting story, I hope! :)

AU can be tricky and it needs to be done well but it's A LOT of fun to play around with. I'm really glad you weren't confused about things. I try to explain everything as much as I can, but obviously some things can get lost in translation.

Yes, fairy tales are definitely incorporated into the main themes of this fic and were a huge inspiration for its writing. I do hope you come back soon to check out more.

Haha, yeah, I did kill off his father pretty quickly, but I didn't want certain things to drag on and while his father's death is certainly a catalyst, it's not a huge aspect of the story itself.

Glad you liked it! Hope to see you back and thanks for the review!

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