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Review:eternalangel says:
This was quite an excellent chapter. For me, I think this chapter pulled me into this story more than the first chapter. I think it has to do with the fact that more of the character's personalities were explored in this. I also really like the dynamic you have set up between both Freddie and Ryan and Freddie and Roxanne. I think the brother-sister relationship you have depicted between Freddie and Roxanne is not only realistic, but well thought out.

Overall I am enjoying this story and I rarely read next gen stories. So keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind thoughts.

It's complicated to try and get everything introduced and still go on with the story. I do think there are some things I may change down the road, but overall this is such a rewarding story to write. I realy do love it and I'm happy to know so many people are on board. Thank you so much!

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