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Review:thakingm_m says:
Well Im sorry I havent reviewed all the chapters but I just thought it would be better if I just say everything in one review ;) ok so here it comes :P are you ready? Ok thats good ^^

First off I want to say I really enjoyed this story, good plot and so on but what I didnt like was that everything was so perfect in one way or another, even with the whole Ron is crazy thing. You could also see from a mile coming that everyone was going to have perfect lives, and that Ron will live in Last Chance so it got kind of boring at the end. AND (yep I write 'and' in big letters xD) it was all so mushy, and hermione was not hermione in a way :/ cause one thing that she did after the pregnancy that was that she cried ALL the time. Hermione is strong and doesnt cry for the smallest things someone says to her :o (in my opinion) EVERYONE I mean everyone were so mushy, like kissing each other all the time, hugging each other when they have just met, saying touchy stuff all the time and its just not normal, Im sorry if I hurt your feelings but I dont want to lie and I dont want that someone says that to you in a harsher way so thats why Im telling you this :) BUT (oh yeah theres always a but :D ) I liked the story really much and u are a good writer! :D
Hope I dont upset you :)
9/10 MM ~ A Proud Hufflepuff

Author's Response: Thank you for being honest, and you didn't hurt my feelings!! :) I really appreciate reviews, as long as they are honest, thats all I want! :) I agree it was a mushy story, which is what I was going for, I had a bad time in my own life when I wrote this, I just needed something that I could pretend with...so there you go Mondays! :) Thanks again for the review!!! :)

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