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Review:hpfanno1 says:
LMAO, sophie this is BRILLIANT! i thought you were gonna do a cliché and lock james and lily up in a broom cupboard or the room of requirement (ROR) or something, and you completely amazed me--
i was SO not expecting that!
i guess remus really is the brains behind the brawn, isn't he, that sly wolf!
i can't wait to see how james and lily react, it will be priceless, especially after how silly their fights have become!
i'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter..
so update soon!
loyally,
fanna

Author's Response: Hi there! I was wondering where had you been.

I'm glad that you liked it. I've to say that locking James and Lily wasn't what I had in my mind. Moreover, I wasn't really fond of the idea being locked up in a closet together. I mean, I know exactly what that felt (I've three brothers, one of them is my twin). It's suffocating and will give your feet a really terrible feeling; like they're refusing to work anymore. That's why I choose the Polyjuice Potion. I've planned about this chapter right after I wrote the chapter about Lina got together with Sirius.

And yes, I agree with you about Remus. I always think that Remus is kinda the brain of the pranks the Marauders threw. I also love the idea that it was Remus giving Sirius and Lily the idea of using the Polyjuice Potion. I want to show how brilliant Remus actually is - since I've showed how brilliant James and Sirius are.

I've finished the chapter since two weeks ago (I think). But, I just don't have the time to do it. Tomorrow (9/8/12), I'm gonna go for a camp with the whole lot of the students and teachers of my school. I'll try to post as soon as I'm home.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm really glad you did, Fanna :)
Sophie


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