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Review:TyrannicFeenix says:
Wow, I haven't read much Astoria stuff before, and most of what i have read, I didn't like too much. Not my kind of character I think, but this. Excellent.

I loved her conflict in the Great Hall, the easy out laid in front of her, ready for her to just walk the path and be free. But she chooses the difficult path, the right path, to fight. And I loved seeing that in her mind.

And the painful moment when she realises the truth of her sisters alliegences. It would have broken her heart. To be coerced into evil by your own sister. I've never paid much attention to the canon stories of those two girls but I may have to now, you have inspired me to learn more about Astoria.

It's so well written, every piece falling into place at exactly the right moment, slowly leading to that chilling final word. Loved every moment of it.


Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you liked it! :) I have a huge backstory built up around the Greengrasses in my head, and it gets expanded to some extent in my Rose/Scorpius fics (for fairly obvious reasons) and some of my Teddy-centric fics (because he's close friends with one of their nieces). I like to think of the Greengrasses as being into danger and intrigue - Teddy's friend Johanna is an Auror, and her brother works for the Dragon Research Bureau. They're also virtually all Slytherins - Astoria was the only holdout.

(I love Gryffindor, but I dislike how much Slytherin House was simplified in the books/movies, so I like to add different and interesting dimensions to Slytherin characters that people would not necessarily expect. You should see my Scorpius - he's completely backward from most Scorpiuses I've read. He's a Slytherin Healer.)

Anyway. Now that I've bored you with my rambling, I just want to thank you for the review. I'm sorry it's taken me a little while to answer it, but I really, really appreciate your taking the time to leave it, and I'm glad you liked the story so much. :)

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