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Review:CambAngst says:
Fun start! I love the idea of Tonks playing detective around the castle. Alright, maybe that was a little dismissive, but I'm having a hard time not thinking about my old Encyclopedia Brown books that I used to read growing up.

Tonks's character seemed like an eager, young, carefree version of the character from the books. I really enjoyed seeing her that way. Sometimes it a lot of fun to think back and realize that there was a time when all of these characters were young and not burdened by the horrible things that were going on during books 5, 6 and 7.

I've read one or two stories that ship Tonks and Charlie and I've enjoyed them immensely. Most of them are set when the two are somewhat more mature, so I think this could be even more fun and less of a romantic drama. Can't wait to see how you develop it.

Your writing was terrific in this. Everything flowed nicely and you had a good mix of narrative, dialog and exposition. You introduced the characters in a very natural was that meshed nicely with the plot of the story and it didn't have that awful "awkward first chapter" feel to it. I also couldn't find any typos or grammatical problems.

I think you have something really neat here. Will definitely keep an eye out for updates.

Author's Response: Hey. Sorry for not answering sooner.

I'm glad her character seems that way. I've never written a Tonks and Charlie story before, but I've have written Tonks, only once, and she was older in that.

Thank you for reviewing and for the lovely compliments. I hope you continue to enjoy reading and like that it won't really be a romance. :)


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