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Review:MagicalInk says:
Aw, I can't believe I'm actually sort of feeling fuzzy for the Black sisters. It's really an accomplishment!

I loved your characterization of Bella, all authoritary, but somehow, still caring for her sisters. And little Cissy is so cute, I sort of felt bad for her.

I liked the descriptions, though they felt a bit wordy but I'm guessing that's because of nano? :P Anyway, this will probably be fixed when editing, and maybe adding some smells instead of every single action.

It wasn't too bothering anyway, and I could nicely picture them climbing the tree, helping each other like real siblings. But did I miss the time it was? I could see them making every step up the tree, but I couldn't tell what sort of light was peaking through the leaves, if you see what I mean?

I think it's got potential, and I'm curious to see your take on this complex bond you're creating :)
-Val

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