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Review:Daanana says:
Wow. I saw 580 words and I thought to myself, short read, curious what can be said in so few words, but I should have known better. Everything can be said in few words.

This is absolutely heartbreaking. I can feel for Sirius. I don't just feel FOR Sirius, I actually feel him. Felt my life shatering apart. You just transported me into the mind of Sirius and for a moment I really felt like it was me experiencing this.

His guilt is so beautifully portrayed, especially in contrast to Peter's selfishness. I wasn't ready to die. That line really set the tone for me.

Truly, I am impressed. This piece was really powerful and I think the shortness only adds to it.

Well done!

Author's Response: Wow, this is such an amazing review! Thank you so much for your wonderfully kind words. Sirius is the most heartbreaking of all to me, so this piece really took a lot out. I'm so happy that you were able to feel everything I think Sirius did during those terrible minutes.

Thanks again!

Jami


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