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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling! Thanks for being such a lovely Gryffindor and reviewing the podcasts!

So, I am not familiar with the story this goes to, some of my confusion might have to do with that. I just don't know why Sirius is so infatuated with her. I think maybe you are having her come off as too perfect, that it's hard for me to see the strong emotional connection. Yes, they come from similar background in their own way, but I don't think that would be enough to really make me believe. Again, that is probably because I haven't read the story that goes with it :).

I like that you used the Lily and M's to explain the war, I also LOVED the switching first person PoV's, I think it was really great. There are parts where I feel like Sirius is a little out of CC, I see him very stubborn and really having a lot of pride, so it's hard for me to imagine him trying to convince a girl to be with him. I could see him teasing someone, trying to get them to date him kind of like James and Lily, but the serious/pathetic kind of what just stood out a bit. By the end of it I think you had really gotten him into my head canon of Sirius though :)!.

I don't know how I feel about the Gypsie talents.. I guess I'd have to know more about how they are portrayed to make them seem realistic. But I think it's really great that you've given her heritage so much importance!

I think the writing on this was its strongest point. Very captivating and intruging, great job!!

Jami

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