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Review:MagicalInk says:
Helen, your writing always pulls me in and doesn't let me do anything else, so why not review? :P

I'm so glad you're writing Lavender, I've found her such an interesting character I can't wait to see what you do with her! It's nice you're giving her importance and making her think more about... well everything.

The fact that she isn't thinking only about herself but also the other's aftermath makes us change our perspective her, and i'm really curious as to her character development now.

I feel this was like some sort of stream of conciousness kind of introduction which I really like, but at the same time your descriptions were soft and flowed well. Also, the few lines of dialogue were well picked and gave us a good sight of the 'world outside her mind'.

I keep wondering if she will be more reserved even after leaving the hospital, and if the war affected Parvati in any way. I wonder if Lavender is wondering the same...
But all those questions you left un-answered worked well to pull in the readers and keep us waiting exite for the next chapter!

What is going outside Lavender?
Can't wait to know :)

So I know this isn't full of CC, but all I can think of right now is how well you wrote the strwam of conciousness and how I'm intrigued on your take on her.
-Val

Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much Val! This was a lovely review to receive so thank you so much for stopping by and leaving something so lovely for me :)

This is a bit of an experiment for me as I don't usually write in the present tense/steam of concious type style for anything other than one-shots where as this time I'm going for a whole novella like this, which is going to be interesting but hopefully it will work out well...

It's great that I've got you wondering! I've always found Lavender stories interesting and I guess I wanted to join the ranks. Thanks for reading and review, m'dear :D

-AC


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