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Review:soliloquy says:
GAH. BETH. DON'T BE SILLY. HE LOVES YOU! ONLY YOU. I PROMISE. LISTEN TO MAMA TANYA. -crushes her to bosom-

I am a bit confused though, darling! Sev was talking about how his patronus had changed, but he then said that his patronus had been a doe since always. I didn't see where there was mention of it changing besides him acknowledging that it had changed? If it made sense? I dunno what I'm talking about. If you could clarify, that would be awesome. :D

but no, bethy! He loves you. Patronus' don't just mean that they love someone...it's just...a random animal assigned to them! Maybe Sev is gentle like a doe...there's no other reason...Bethy. -cradles her-

Gaahhh. I have all the feels and nowhere to put them - piles them on janechel-

Author's Response: SNORT. ♥ I love it when you refer to yourself as Mama Tanya, by the by. Don't stop doing it. Cool?

Ahh, I understand your confusion! But, at this point in the story, his patronus has not ever changed since he learned how to do the charm. ;) A bit of confusing wording there -- but he's a bit disappointed, because he's expected it to change. And it hasn't... yet!

Bahaha, of course that's why Severus's takes a doe form, that gentleness. :P Beth does need a bit of cradling, though. Man, if James hadn't said anything...

-is buried under Tanya's feels- ♥

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