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Review:soliloquy says:
I just realized the parallel between Sirius' quick desire to join the Order compared to Snape's equally quick wanting to join the Death Eaters. And their wants are similar and their reasons are a bit, too.

I dunno. That, I thought, was very interesting because of how they're always made to be such terrible enemies. That they have some commonalities, after all, even if their sides are different (not at the end, though. :X)

And how he feels oddly guilty because of Beth. BETHY, YOU'RE GIVING OUR SNAKES A SOUL. YAY! I love how he can't get her off his mind, and yet...there's that desire that he's had for Voldemort's group. That desire that's been bubbling there for so long that no amount of love for anyone would be able to get rid of. :/ Sigh. I love your Sev. He's so complex and broody and awesome.

And all of your characters. But I've said that a bajillion times. They're just so well written and so complex and even though we get brief glimpses of their natures, you still get such a vividly beautiful picture painted.

You do such a great job. I'm so proud to call you my friend! You write amazingly. :D I

Author's Response: YES! I didn't really realize it until setting out to write these stories, but there really is a pretty large parallel in Snape and Sirius. Both want to escape their family life, to join something bigger than themselves, and both are hot-headed and impulsive and stubborn. It's so likely that, in differing circumstances, they would have great friends, for all their similarities. I'm so glad someone else saw that, too!

Ahaha -- Beth is basically Severus's conscience in this story. :P He's sort of at war with himself, really, the angel-versus-devil-on-the-shoulders sort of deal. I'm so glad you like my portrayal of him. ♥ Woe and angst abound!

You are too much. Just... too much. Can I squee again over how fantastic you are for reviewing this entire story for me in one go?! Still not over it, and here's it's been over a month! (And I am so sorry for how long it's taking me to respond to these reviews. I really am!)

♥ Thanks a million, billion, trillion times, yo. You are awesome!

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