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Review:starryskies55 says:
AH SUCH AN AWESOME CHAPTER!

I feel so guilty for not keeping up with this :( Sorry! But, this is an amazing story. I love how Victoire is agonising over all the little things- like Teddy calling her 'Vic' and how she does know him still. I also love the way that when she's thinking of him in a work-related way, he's 'Lupin' and when she's not, it's 'Teddy'. The scene with the lady in the house with the doilies, is great, and I love love love Victoire attempting to switch on her own charm. She does right to pull in her friends, and I hope she sorts stuff out with Teddy soon! :( Lover's tiffs on a case should be hilarious! Also, she is on fire today- not one, but two epiphanies! Brilliant. You're such a fantastic writer, Julia!

Teddy is on great form as well, with the naive flirting and the hair turning darker with stress- it's a fantastic touch. Plus, he's so adorable, I fully agree with Victoire!

Your description is flawless, everything from the 'kitchen' and the whistling kettle to the doilies in Maddison's house- you paint such a detailed picture with your words! I particularly loved the description of the interrogation as well, the analysing of the body language and Victoire trying to get Teddy in the questioning as well (in addition to the great little remark of 'lazy git'), the fantastic detail really goes in-depth, as opposed to skimming the surface and just doing Q&A.

This is another superb chapter of a great story, and, thank you for all your work in the House Cup!
Ten hundred thousand out of ten :)

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