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Review:Jchrissy says:
This was a really nice one shot! I think you did a great job contrasting their day and night lives, although I did find myself wondering why. Some of your descriptions referring to her trying to wash away his scent, reminded me a lot of the way an assaulted victim would feel. But then you make it clear she's addicted to him.. Then I also found myself wondering why she knew she would leave him? Why she wanted to stay mentally removed from their intimate moments and if she wanted to seem so strong, why she even came in the first place? I would have really loved more about them.

I think your descriptions and emotions were gorgeous. They made this story feel very real and alive. This was a wonderfully written one shot!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! For the challenge I could only use 500 words exact so I couldn’t exactly be elaborated with those points. The way I see it it is as though one side of her is saying to leave him, and the other half is saying enjoy spending time with him. She is dealing with guilt and mixed emotions and the way I see it their relationship is really complex and I hoped that I was clear that despite everything you read there were many issues lurking beneath the surface that I just touched upon. That’s why I liked that you said reminded you a lot the way an assaulted victim would feel. Thanks for your review and I hoped that I could answer your questions if not you can always ask me further about it in my MTA or PM me.

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