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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hi Elenia!

(Okay, I'm so skipping like so many chapters here, I promise I'll review them all later, I just managed to the previous two and this today!)

Finally! Oh my gosh, good grief! The relief that came over me when it finally got revealed that Kat was just a fake. Yes. Oh my gosh, I just wish Gwen rattled her more. *cough* Major chick fight *cough*

I already know the scam for quite a few chapters now, so when I saw the title 'Euphoria' I had a feeling that it was either something to do with Gwen's Dad or the baby...turns out it's both! :P

Despite that tiny knowledge about the scam, I seriously could not have imagined it being revealed like this. I mean, whoa! So much rage! So much intensity! Like, I almost could feel Gwen, Harry and James' anger through the screen, whoa. That was amazing!

I like the fact that we don't have to worry about Gwen's dad. You haven't mentioned him for the past few chapters and I like the way you subtly put the reason behind it, but I understand, if I were Gwen I would've pushed back the thoughts too and she has certainly a lot of things on her plate right now. Still, it's great relief that we don't have to witness Gwen suffer. She has suffered too much already.

"I love you," he whispered softly, making my heart feel like it would break through my chest. Yes. Damn it. He finally noticed! Yes. I have this really great feeling that James isn't talking about friendly love...but like real love! I am in pure euphoria right now! See what I did there? ;)

Gah, your story just keeps getting better and better! Looking back from the very beginning, this story has certainly come a long way and has had so many unexpected plot twists. It's been such a great pleasure to read Trying Not To Love you! Now, if only you get James and Gwen together! Poor Joshua...poor poor Joshua. ;(

This story has made my day countless times, but right now I feel like it's made my whole week or perhaps the whole month! :P I is just amazing talent combined with an amazing plot. Double times the amazingness! :D (What the hell am I even saying?)

Thank you so much for kicking Kat out of the story! I think we've all had enough of her!

Izzy xx

Author's Response: Hello, dear (:

Don't worry about it. I'm just glad that you're here!

Haha yes, I wanted to give Gwen a chance to beat her more, but then decided against it. I think it was better this way d:

Well I'm glad it all worked for you! This whole chapter practically wrote itself. I've had it ready for several weeks already (except the minor editing I had to do)

Yeah, I actually meant to mention him a lot sooner, but just couldn't make it work with the happenings in the previous chapters. So I'm glad the reasons made sense to you!

Yes, so many moments in this chapter that the title can refer to (;

Thank you so much for all your compliments! They made my month!

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