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Review:missclaire17 says:
oh gosh.
so many choices for an epilogue!
i'd love... not A... B is nice (the scene about raven on rush hour)... C isn't bad either (i love multiple scenes. D... D is okay too, i suppose.
I think I'd choose C with B in it.
does that make sense? O.O

i always wondered how to write a short story but i feel like you fit everything in perfectly.
i could see where the wedding was slightly rushed through but it was nice(:

Author's Response: I think that's what it's going to be in the end! :) Thanks for telling me your opinion. I'm glad that the story seems to fit. I thought some parts were a bit wonky and I'm a pretty concise writer, so it makes me happy that I didn't leave too much out. :)

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