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Review:EverDiggory says:
This was brilliant! What a wonderful idea! You really had me absorbed in the story, I'm impressed!

It seemed to me like you really had the emotions down! I felt Lily's hurt, anger and pain. It definitely through me for a loop when she got all terrible at the end again!

I didn't see too many grammar errors, so that was good.

I adored how Liky didn't forgive Petunia, I've noticed people think she would, but I strongly disagree. The only thing that seemed off to me was Lily cussing once. It seemed odd because she was so dignified and didn't need to cuss to cut Pet deep. Maybe it's just me though!

I loved this! 9/10

xx

Ever

Author's Response: Thank you!

I really think that the only way that Petunia could have forgotten this entire encounter would be to revert back to her former self, kind of as a defense mechanism.

I've actually really been rethinking cutting that line out, or at least rephrasing it. I don't think I like how it fits with the story anymore, and you commenting on it only reminded me.

Thank you!

~Cassie


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