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Review:BoOkWoRm24 says:
Wow, this was very intense. I could just feel the stress and confusion radiateing off the narration of poor Mary.

I thought that Alzheimers was a pretty brave topic to write about. I know that a lot of people probably can relate to this, I know I can. My grandma has alzheimers, and every time we go visit her she thinks we are her old neighbor's kids. Its rather depressing.

Since I do have a little bit of backround knowledge on the disease though, I can honestly say that I thought this chapter really embodied the feelings that went along with it. Everything from the confusion she feels, to the pain that Arthur feels.

The entire 5 ways to die thing was an interesting way to organize things. It made the emotions seem more intense since we know that she's dying, but since there are five different ways you really illuminate the idea of a slow death. Its very sad, but it was good.

Anyway, great one shot, everything was very well written. Hope to see you around the BvB battle some time again soon :)

-Liz

Author's Response: Hi Liz! Thank you for reviewing (and nominating this for SOTM :P).

Alzheimer's is actually a surprisingly common disease, and it's all the more awful becasue there really is nothing anyone can do about it. You're right- lots of people can relate. i don't know why, but I find it quite important that people can relate to my writing.

Yay! I'm so pleased you think so :)

See youa round the CR ;)
-Annon


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