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Review:ginerva_molly_weasley says:
Jenny :O This is beyond cute.

I love the fact in this that Domnique is deaf in this because it adds things which generally aren't around very much in fanfiction. The idea of her putting her hand to the floor to feel the vibrations is very realistic as it is what a lot of deaf people do to hear so I think you showed that exceptionally well.

I also liked the fact that she used a dog to help her just as many deaf people in muggle society do as they are sort of a lifeline for them so I like the way you seemed to make her almost dependant on the dog, particularly when she meets the new people. I understand her not liking meeting new people on her own as she wouldn't be able to speak or understand them so they could think she was being rude.

Photographs seems to work so brilliantly as a title because Domnique is right, her sight gives her all of the image she needs. Her world is so complete even without the sound and I liked that she was content with that. Well done Jenny!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Summer, I'm so glad you liked my fic.

I wanted to show Dominique as happy in her silent world, even though she still very much has a disability and is dependant to some extent on her dog, so I'm very happy that came through in my writing.

Thanks for the review!


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