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Review:shadowycorner says:
Wow, this was very moving and unique. A good way to take on a non-dialogue challenge, too. I loved your description throughout the entire piece. I could perfectly imagine everything...from the fresh air coming from the sea and Joey running around. Wonderful. i envy people who can describe things with such ease.

This is one of those stories that's lovely because of the little things. Like how Dominique has the connection with her dog. Like the smiles from her parents and all. I loved how since she was deaf, her other senses were pivotal for her and you described that flawlessly.

The end was amazing and it actually made me also a little sad to imagine it all. But I really liked the optimism with which Dominique seemed to be grasping the issue.

Really, there's nothing more I can say. It was simple and lovely and I liked it very much. Thank you for sharing. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I hope your ankle gets better soon :( once my ankle swelled up to the size of one of those mini footballs and it was really painful, so I feel for you.

This wrote itself for me, and I wrote it in one sitting, trying to imagine what it would be like to be deaf (I was at the seaside too, so that may have influenced me).

I've always prided myself on dialogue, so this description was a real challenge and I'm so glad you liked it. I wanted the overall feel to be happy and optimistic, so I'm glad that came through.

Thank you so much for the review! *huggles*


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