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Review:water_lily43175 says:
CRYING WITH JOY. I'm having to read this on my phone because my laptop is otherwise engaged which is a bit devastating but I can't wait so the phone will have to do!

Chapter image. I love. Chapter title. YES. Tanith and Jacob in a car. Amazing. Intrigued at what they're doing. Ah, Lackardy. I knew who he was without the reminder! But even so, a nice reminder of the state of play. And it's nice that not all the Baddies are Death Eaters.

Last night? Hmm. Curious.

Oh, I love that the car throwing UTTERLY refuses to leave Tanith alone.

Oh Jacob. I DID NOT SEE THIS COMING. ;) On a serious note, it's a bit of a shocker coming in the first chapter! Off to a flying start. Oh, poor Tanith. Gutted.

Footsteps with a tap. TOBY.

Oh. Last night. I see. Toby you idiot. Oh, and Tanith STILL doesn't think she can be anything less than strong, the silly thing. Ugh, I just love it, how she needs him but he's being an idiot and WORKING too much.

Vaughn telling Tanith to take the week off or he'll take her badge. YES. I love him.

'I've got a job in mind for you.' I WONDER WHAT. Excited.

Oh Toby you're an idiot. OH TANITH. Yes, time apart, not that Toby will notice because HE'S AN IDIOT.

Overall chapter feelings: so happy for more Anguisverse! Devastated that Jacob died so soon - but then, why put it off? Loving the T/T drama, it's so typical them, they would take a while to figure out how things are going to work between them. MASSIVE THUMBS UP, and I'm excited for MORE MORE MORE. Just, you know, forget Ren. Chapter two please!

Author's Response: Reviewing on a phone keypad? That's dedication. I like my chapter images, I've done all but one of them now and if nothing else the casting game amused me intensely.

Yeah, I do go a bit exposition crazy on this, but equally Lackardy was a bit peripheral a character so I figured it was worth reminding my readers who don't care about my ridiculous cast quite as much as I do.

I think this has to be the last time anyone throws a car. I've done it, referred to it, subverted it, and hung a lampshade on it almost as much as I've done that with Tanith setting fire to things. Girl needs new awesome tricks she can become notorious for.

YES. IT WAS A TOTAL SHOCK I WAS KILLING HIM. Just because you got the less-pretentious Beta Summary. :P And it happening as a gut punch in the opening scene is both a reason why it got into the summary, and a reason why it was taken out.

Vaughn's a dude. But he's right, and it was fun writing someone who can just cut through Tanith's ridiculous stubbornness in one fell swoop.

Tanith still has a whole WORLD of baggage from the war - even if she's getting a bit better at dealing with things like grief. A year ago she wouldn't have let herself go to pieces like that, for instance. And Tobias IS being a bit of an idiot - but next chapter is from his POV and hopefully will put his decisions and attitudes into a bit more context. And Tanith is certainly not a saint herself. But yes, relationships are tough and these two wouldn't make life easy for one another.

There will be more! I promise. Just three more Ren chapters and one's in the queue now and it'll be nothing but new content constantly in the queue! Even if I outpace Ignite I have 3-6 months of constant BTP to put out. :D Thanks for reviewing.


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