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Review:Dezire_427 says:
Whooo! New chapter! I actually couldn't recognise it at first, because of the new banner. But its awesome.
I'm in the grey area. You know, somewhere between responsible and irresponsible. Atleast at home. At school, i'm the most sincere and diligent student you'll ever meet. Not even bragging. 'Tis the truth.
This chapter was very...angry and glareful. Poor James, I feel his misery, having to live around Ginny, Molly, Lily and Selene, women who constantly glare at him to death.
Abortion...i guess i've never seen a story on this, or any other site, where the mother to be consuders it as an option. So I wasn't in the least surprised when Sel freaked out after James suggested it.
The Willow Dodge game looks very interesting. And James not inheriting his parents' skills? An abomination, I tell you!
All in all, an eventful chapter, and I liked it, especially the part about responsibility. I think i'll copy it out for my essays. :p
Love, cheers, and all that Jazz,
Dizzy.
P.S. Have you heard Glad You Came and Lightning by The Wanted? If not, plz do, those songs are as awesome as you! :)

Author's Response: Haha, yeah. I quite like the banner. It makes me happy :)

I'm pretty much just like you, as far as responsibility. Diligent during school, but outside... more in between. But leaning more towards the responsible side. I hope.

I wanted to make James a bit less of the typical cliched James in most stories. But there will be more on James and Quidditch later. Shh. Don't tell.

The responsibility part was fun. I like to use the chapter beginnings to muse about various things. I like writing them and it gives James some depth, I think.

And yes, I do know those songs :) And thank you!

-Laura


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