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Review:Cleopatraa says:
Okay seeing I love your writing style and your plots I decided to read another thing of you ( and thankfully you have so much so much to read that it would keep me content for awhile but it does make me wonder how do you do that). You wrote quite a confused character and I don’t mean this in a bad way because her being so fascinated me as most people don’t write such characters. She was in my opinion quite likeable and I found her really realistic. I was happy this hadn’t a happy after, okay that sounds horrible but I don’t mean it that way, you see most people give their characters a happy after but in life that mostly doesn’t happen. Though I liked them together a lot. The both of them (together) had such a noble feeling, it’s hard to explain, but that’s what I thought.

Author's Response: Thank you for coming back to read more of my work! It's fantastic that you've done so, and I really appreciate it. Haha, there is a lot that I've written - I don't know where it's come from, but I try to write in whatever spare time I have, so I guess it adds up over time. :D

Dorcas is very confused. She was already an imaginative person, but when her family was killed, her mind couldn't handle it - she's not damaged in the same way as the Longbottoms, but she isn't far from it. Writing this kind of character was almost frightening because she's so depressed and no longer able to find anything to live for. I'm really glad to hear that she was realistic, and that her story was too. There can't be happily ever afters for everyone, especially when they're in a war.

She and Sirius made a great pair, in the end. I hadn't expected them to compliment each other that way, nor did I think he would feel so much sympathy and affection for her. He was only too late in realizing how much he did care for her. I agree that it's hard to explain, but that's the kind of relationship I like to write most - it's more complicated and has more of an emotional effect because it can't be properly described. It's a very strange thing.

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