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Review:The Last Marauder says:
Damn you for your cliff-hangers! Seriously! NOT FAIR! Ah, I am kidding, you know that.

I will admit I saw the troubles between Bill and Fleur coming from the moment Tonks said that the twins had said they were having problems. I don't know why I just instantly knew what it was.

I also liked that you had Dolohov carve a 'D' into the doors of places he had murdered, and how Remus say that as a sneering invitation almost - I'm still here, come and have a go.

I thought you did the taboo scene really well. I loved he line "we say that name and you lot pop up like daisys" - that was funny, it made me laugh in a very tense situation.

I liked your use of silver, I know it's not strictly canon, but I think it's great regardless. The idea that silver is a werewolf's weakness, because in folklore the only way to kill a werewolf is with a silver bullet as you know.

Now I just want to know who 'saved' them - I don't know if save is the right word because they knocked Remus unconscious as they 'saved' him, unless I misinterpreted that bit?

Anyway, really great chapter, seriously cannot wait for more :-)

Author's Response: i know, i just love those cliff-hangers too much (he he) :)

and i will try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible so you can find out what's going on, and i will say you're right to question whether 'save' is the right word, as you'll soon find out. ;)

thank you so much again for reviewing, and now i MUST, MUST, MUST get back to Pottermore, especially since if Chamber of Secrets is coming up, then it won't be too long till we get to my absolute fave book, prisoner of azkaban! (of course)

but first i'm going to go see if there's a new chapter in "Door into the Dark" :D

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