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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Hey lovely! I thought this chapter was really sweet!

Horatio (which is an awesome name) was such a prefect humor balance to the situation and Louis' feelings. He acted just how I would think a best friend of a pregnant girl's boyfriend should have.

His family is lovely! I thought Dominique and Victorie were hilarious. Again the great humor balances.

It's going to sound weird because she really should go to the hospital wing and/or tell someone, but I am glad at the end that Horatio kept his mouth shut. I think it's too soon for drama and the stress of fighting can do damage to a baby. Again, he's a wonderful friend :D

I really like the originality of this story. I like how you took that 'teen pregnancy' story and gave it from a completely different point of view. It has that sense of familiarity but it still is something new.

Lovely work! I can't wait to read more♥

*takes cookie for review*

-Julie

Author's Response: Heya my love! I hope you're ok. Awww thank you my sweet :-D
Oh yeah I love that name! I totally stole it from a well know tv program but still! It fits. I'm so glad that you like him, he is definately needed by Louis in this story, I think Horatio is going to be the voice of reason and push Louis in the right direction of things.
Louis needs a lot of humour in his life right now :-D
Oh yeah she really does need to go to the hospital wing, but soon more people will find out so it won't be long until it all comes out.
Horatio loves Louis too much to tell on him :-D although he's still really annoyed at Freya for making Louis keep this a secret.
Thank you so much Julie! That means so much to me! *blushes* I'm really enjoying writing this story so I can't wait to see what you think of the other chapters, (when I finish writing them oops)
Thank you so much! x


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