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Review:Moonyxluna says:
Aw, this was so lovely!

I love how you rationalized her fear of owls and gave her multiple reasons for it. Putting it in a different light, owls are kind of creepy! We love them because it's sort of a symbol of the Harry Potter world, but really just imagining breakfast is a bit terrorizing. I especially loved the emotional connection that she never gets letters so she has that as a secondary reason to dislike them.

I think she has such a lovely group of friends. Dorcas is one of those potential characters (being that all we really know is that she was in the order) so I really like how you are using her. Especially making her a Hufflepuff! (which you already know I love) but I only always see Marauder era Order members as Gryffindors so I think that's a lovely change of pace.

Aaron really was a good friend. - *sighs* the stab of the friendzone. Poor kid. I love all of your original characters! It was quite a few but you still managed to give each one of them their appropriate times to shine so each one of them still stands out in my mind. I thought Aaron was sweet! I also like how you are making her not 'best friends with Lily' and all those other Marauder cliches we talked about :p But I like how you took the Lily and James aspect and talked about it normally. I think it set Sera apart that - not necessarily that she didn't care - but that it wasn't on her top list of teenage drama that Lily and James have all of that 'hatred' tension.

I really love wallflower characters (and the socially awkward ones :p) because they're so relatable, but giving her the popularish best friends gives the story that sense of balance that I'm so fond of in your writing.

Lovely work dear! Can't wait to read more of this and tntyl♥

-Julie

Author's Response: Haha, yes! They are! I never could understand how people could be so calm about it when there were birds flying around - while they were eating! Yuck!

I knew you'd love it that the two of them were Puffs ^^ there seriously are too few stories where the MC is from the house of yellow and black so I wanted to change that!

Yes, that's how Sera sees him, let's hope it's enough for him too ^^

And yeah, I'm sure Sera would've noticed more if she had paid attention but she has bigger things in her mind to do so.

Thank you so much, sweetie ♥ all your support is so wonderful!


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