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Review:Georgia Weasley says:
I absolutely adore the return to Hogwarts. Hermione automatically seeks out the library, of course. Memory or not, she and Ron are still the same characters we know and love. He's out on the Quidditch pitch, and she's buried in books in the library. Perfect. You build the tension between them so well. I find myself just dying for them to be alone together again. There are a few typos in the chapter. "Besides, she could alwazs return it later, so it was reallz onlz borrowing." And a few others. Nothing major. I hardly noticed them, I was so absorbed in the story. Great chapter. I can't wait for more! ~GW

Author's Response: Aa, I will run and fix it right after this reply. I added the sentence there later and my keyboard setting was on my Slovak language where the z&y are switched, for whatever reason. Thank you for pointing it out!

I loved writing the Hogwarts scenes, I was only a little worried I did a rubbish job on the descriptions and whether I captured the right atmosphere. Things are really bound to be happening now that R&Hr kissed and she found out about the engagement. The situation still remains complicated, though.

Thank you so so much for reviewing. I am jumping with joy that you liked it.


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