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Review:atellam says:
So I'm back. :)

The interior design is an interesting idea, and I'm curious to see how you expand on that in the next few chapters. I just want to point out that even though this chapter was from the third person, there was one line where you slipped back into first person. You might want to read through and edit that bit back to third. :)

Anyway, other than that, this was good. A bit short, but I can't complain. :P Hope to see another update soon. :)

- Adele

Author's Response: yay! I was quite excited about the interior design thing as well and i know! I'm so sorry, i think its subconscious that i just switch back, i'm actually editing chapters and i've finished the first 3 i think so i'll get to it soon. Thank you for reviewing , again . It means a lot! xxx

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