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Review:momotwins says:
Wow, this was a really interesting take on Voldy. I'm not really a fan of second person POV, but it was really effective here. I like the way you portrayed his horror and fear of death, the thought he'd be a rotting body someday just like everyone else, that he sees death on the faces of everyone he looks at. Fascinating idea. And that he thought himself the handmaiden (as it were) of death - wow. He's so fascinated with death, it makes murder sort of the next progression for him - I see the logic behind it and I think it's a really smart way to look at his character. Insane yes, but somehow logical. His transition to feeling mortal after losing his final Horcrux is very well done.

This is amazingly well-written! You have a lot of talent. :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks a lot for the nice review.

This is actually my first story with the second person POV. I usually don't write like that, but I thought that it was the most effective way to make Voldemort seem more human. I mean what better way to empathize with him than if you were him. If that makes sense.

I'm glad that you liked the entire thing about his relationship with death. (if you could call it that) I figured that Voldemort might have viewed everything that way since he spent his life running away from the grave. I was a bit woried I didn't do it justice though, but its good to hear that I did

Anyway thank again for this review. The feedback really means a lot :)


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