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Review:academica says:
Hey Jami! Here from review tag :)

This was truly chilling. I agree, that moment sends chills up my spine, because I know what must inevitably come next. I think what makes me even angrier is that Peter refused to even admit to the horrible thing he did. He didn't seem to possess an ounce of Gryffindor bravery. His sorting baffles me.

That said, I think your one-shot really shows the differences between Sirius and Peter. Sirius drives himself mad with guilt, pushes and pushes to do what he can to preserve his hope and help Lily and James. I hate watching his heart be torn out there at the end, but I think you characterized him so well.

The bit of imagery at the beginning with the note was beautiful, especially the ink-related comment.

Great job! :)

-Amanda

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful review! I am happy you liked Sirius's characterizations, because for me this is really the defining point of what became of the Marauders. I swear every time I start thinking about it I want to cry. Bawww.

I really loved that part, too. Am I allowed to say that? Haha, but something about writing it and imagining it really stuck inside my head.

Anyway, thank you again for this amazing review ♥

I'm also very happy you tagged me, because this was one I was going to request for, hehe.

Jami



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