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Review:Anonomys says:
This is a brilliant story, definitly one of my favs on this
sight. Here's a suggestion. Whenever Hermione chose a
different place, Yaxley sees it, but Hermione doesn't
notice. Instead of someone being hurt when they get to
where they apparated, have Yaxley apparate there as
well and suprise them. Then, Yaxley curses Hermione
somehow and she goes unconsious. Harry and Ron are
left to deal with Yaxley. They eventually get him and
wipes his memories. When Harry and Ron turn to help
Hermione, they see she has a pulse, but they can't lift the
curse. Hope that's enough to get you started with
something.

Author's Response: Where were you when I was stuck with this chapter? lol this would have been brilliant.

Unfortunately, I have been updating this fanfic somewhere else and have already moved on from this chapter. I still plan to update here as well but the Guidelines are giving me trouble. I think I need to get a beta so I can finally update here.

Thanks for your input though. If you can think of anything else that would be nice for the story in future chapters be sure to PM. I'd love any suggestions as I still have some blocks in this story.


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