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Review:angel_speaks says:
Hiya!
EM here again with your requested review ^_^

Characterization: I loved the amount of emotions that you wrote in the beginning of the chapter! I hope to see more of that in the future chapters! It definitely make Kat relatable. I can't wait to read more and more of the twins :D

Plot: So far so good. There wasn't any plot holes and the flow is ok. I think the transitions can go a lot more smoothly though. Nevertheless, this is still a pretty good chapter!

Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Hello Em!

I'm editing the chapters to include more description and emotion hopefully I'll be able to get that done, and i love the twins too :P

Phew! I'm happy there aren't any plot holes so far! I was secretly worried about those, got it I'll watch out for the transitions when I get the chance to edit this chapter in particular.

Thank you for your help!


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