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Review:angel_speaks says:
Emesias again with your requested review.

Characterization: You are definitely doing pretty well on this part. On this chapter, the audience learned more of Kat's history. I really like how the story showed her relationships with the people she's with while she's not in school. With that plus the emotion that you incorporated makes her seem more human and relatable.

Plot: As I said, the Kat's history was very informative and really helped in developing the story as well as the characters (two thumbs up!). I'd really like to see more of that on the future chapters :D

Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Hello sorry for the late response :P

Thank you I'm happy to see I'm doing well with my characterization, I want her to be a relatable lead especially since she holds such a special place in my heart.

There will be more plot development in later chapters, the pacing although a bit slow at times I think is the right one for this story.

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