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Review:angel_speaks says:
Hiya!
Emesias here with your requested review!
I'm so sorry that it's taking me awhile to fill your review.

Characterization:So far, I'm liking how your characters are turning out. from what I have read so far, they are pretty close to the canon (when it comes to J.K.'s original characters). I'm still loving Fred and George; their personalities are just too adorable to handle ;) I still look forward to Katherine Rowle. It would be nice to see more physical description of her including her emotions; i think that it would help develop her character and make her seem more human.

Plot: As for the plot, so far so good. I'm liking Katherine's interactions with George. I can't wait for all the romance to begin :D As mentioned previously, adding more to the details including your character's emotions will help with the development of the story as well as the characters.

Overall, I noticed some grammar and spelling issues. There were also some words missing, but nothing too disturbing and it's easily fixable ^_^ I hope this helps.

Happy Writing!

Author's Response: Hullo! Sorry for the late response :P

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy my characters , they are adorable aren't they :) More description, got that :)

I can't wait for the romance either :P But I'm trying to be as realistic as possible. I'll look over this chapter and fix those grammar errors :) Thank you for your review

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