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Review:Jchrissy says:
Wow, you are off to a really great start! Nothing about this first chapter seems familiar, like I've it before. It's all extremely interesting and well written, the tension radiating from Harry was easily felt.

I love the concept of The Muggle, and even more I love how thorough you're being with exactly how this happened. Not just letting some muggle get powers and go all evil villain, but you're talking about how he got there and how it happened. It makes this first chapter have a lot of solidified substance and shows your skills as a writer.

Characters were wonderful, I think Harry would be a challenge to write and Ginny dang near impossible, so you've really impressed me with your portrayal of them so far.

Wonderful chapter! Sorry this isn't more detailed, I'm reviewing from my iPhone :).

Jami

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for reading this story, Jami! I was very pleasantly surprised to see this review and it really made my day! Thank you so much!

I'm really glad that you like the idea of the Muggle :) It was something that came to me in one instant and I knew the entire story behind him. There's more about him in further chapters and I hope that you read on to find out :)

Don't worry about it not being detailed; you've reviewed almost everything I've written so I'm already very grateful to you for coming here and reviewing this too! Thank you SO much! :)

-Cal

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